Don't worry bud, you'll find your way out
What I really loved about this animation was that at the beginning where you gave the intro about the story and the whole paragraph of words. I liked it because you gave me just the right amount of time to read the information, cause Im a slow reader and some animators make messages go to fast.... but you HAHAHA YOU! Well, you did it well.
As for the rest of your work, I liked it. It all reminded me of old cartoons.